英国留学个人陈述解析

专家讲座【活动预告】关于美国留学签证的事儿

  • 上海 立思辰留学
  • 2021-12-24 10:00
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专家讲座【活动预告】留学澳洲如何选择专业呢?

  • 上海 立思辰留学
  • 2021-12-15 10:00
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专家讲座【活动预告】加拿大留学申请定位解读

  • 上海 立思辰留学
  • 2021-12-10 10:00
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留学项目澳洲重开国门在即,立思辰留学钜惠来袭!

  • 上海 立思辰留学
  • 2021-11-22 10:00
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  立思辰留学360分析到,个人陈述(PS)是国内学生申请英国大学研究生必须要提交的申请材料之一。个人陈述也是申请者对自己的评述,如个人能力、性格、爱好等。个人陈述的好坏有时和申请成功紧密相关。

  那么如何出一篇好的个人陈述呢?首先大家要反思自己的学习经历;确立文章的主题,写作也要有自己的特色。同学们可以多参看写优秀的个人陈述范文,结合自己的实际情况才能写出好的PS.

  由于商科类申请的同学偏多,留学360留学小编特地为大家分享一篇商科类的个人陈述,希望大家可以从中找到灵感。

  As a child I often accompanied my father to his small coin shop and spent hours watching him work. When I was older, I sometimes set up displays, waited on customers, and even balanced the books. This experience instilled in me the desire to own and manage my own business someday, yet I understand that the business world today is more complex. This complexity requires more education, and with that in mind, I am applying to the Master’s of Business Administration program at Indiana University Bloomington (IUB).

  通过一个故事开头,讲述自己为何对business感兴趣。

  In addition to my helping out in my father’s business, I have had numerous other work experiences that further enhance my qualifications for this program. My resume enumerates the various positions I have held at Kerasotes Theaters, Chili’s restaurants, and Indiana University’s new Student Recreational Sports Center (SRSC), and what all of these positions have in common is an emphasis on serving the public effectively. Further, as an assistant manager at the Showplace 11 and a staff coordinator at the SRSC, I have gained valuable expertise in managing employees and creating work schedules. Both of these positions have allowed me to develop my sales and people skills, which are extremely important in an increasingly service-driven marketplace.

  讲述自己的相关经历。但是感觉在谈及经历时候不够具体,应该说明具体做了什么事情,从中得到什么经验或者教训。

  Not all of my work experience has been as a paid employee. Part of my volunteering experience at Middleway House, the local battered women’s shelter, involved extensive work on computers, including word processing, organizing databases and creating spreadsheets. Also, I recently participated in an internship program for academic credit with the Eli Lilly corporation in the personnel division. As a management intern, I was able to watch the workings of a major corporation up close and would like the opportunity to combine my experiences with the theoretical background available in the MBA program at IUB, with its emphasis on computers, marketing and human resources.

  志愿者活动同样值得在ps中讲述。

  My successful internship is one element of my overall academic success as an undergraduate here at IUB, yet I have also made time for a variety of extracurricular activities, including working for my sorority and competing in intramural basketball. My positive experiences here have resulted in my desire to stay in Bloomington to continue my academic endeavors; furthermore, continuing my education here would allow me to make important business contacts, with the career goal of opening my own computer consulting firm in the Midwest.

 

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